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 The truck stopped, and the workers were surprised. “You look surprised, what is wrong?” Thabiso asked and got off the truck. “No friend, but we are surprised that you came here speeding,” Mali said. “Friend, why is your shirt so bloody?” Thabiso asked. Mali was still scared. “They robbed me, my friend.” “Then why you couldn’t say that?” Hlanaka asked. “No, I was still in shock,” Mali said. “Mali, let’s go load the bricks so we can deliver them to the location,” Thabiso said, and got ready. Lerato saw a message on her phone and called Thabiso. “Dear, forgive me, my phone was off,” Lerato insisted, she was on the phone. “Dear, are you still alright?” Thabiso asked. “Don’t forget we’re going to dinner today, I want to be with you, and I missed you,” Lerato said on the phone. “Okay, we’ll meet when I get home.” Thabiso hang up the phone and wondered why he killed Neo. “So what’s going on, friend?” Mali asked. Thabiso was so silent for a moment. “I killed Neo by mistake. Lerato wants t...

 It was a normal day, Thabiso picked up Neo and Mali as usual. “I’m glad to see you happy,” said Mali. Thabiso was singing. “Lerato has sorted things out with me,” said Thabiso. “Lerato is brave,” Neo said, and he laughed. “Don't start with your jokes, man,” said Mali. “I don’t know what Lerato sees in Thabiso,” Neo laughed again. “In other words, are you in love with Lerato?” Thabiso asked.  “Thabiso man, I can’t do that. Lerato is my friend,” Neo said. “I see you’re attracted to her,” Thabiso said. “Neo is Lerato’s friend. Do you think he would do that?” Mali asked. Thabiso picked up the phone and called Lerato; her phone was off. “Lerato doesn’t have time for you,” Neo laughed. “Guys, I forgot to take my lunchbox. We have to go back,” Thabiso said. “Thabiso, we are running late. Are you aware of the time?” Mali asked. Thabiso turned back.  “Man, I love Lerato with all my heart,” Thabiso said, looking at Mali. When Thabiso got home, he took the gun and the lunchbox. Tha...

Things became worse in Thabiso's life. Neo visited Lerato and found her having a drink while watching TV. “Friend, be careful of Thabiso, I think he's going to do something stupid,” said Neo. Lerato found herself wondering why Neo had said that. “I broke up with that person, we're no longer together, I don't even know what he did.” “Thabiso fights people. Yesterday, he fought with everyone,” said Neo, looking scared. “Thabiso needs help, I need to help him,” said Lerato. “No, break up with him,” said Neo. “Thabiso needs help; we need to make an appointment to meet with a counsellor,” said Lerato. Neo wasn't happy about that. “I don't think Thabiso needs help; that person is stubborn.” “You don't have to give up,” said Lerato. “Friend, I'm helping you here. I don't want you to be near him,” said Neo. “Do you think he won't listen to me?” Asked Lerato. “That person is stubborn,” added Neo. Lerato had hope that Thabiso would change and become like o...

 Thabiso had a nightmare about his parents, and it was a horrible dream. While he was dreaming, he saw a man with a gun coming towards him, and he couldn't see his face. In the dream, Thabiso was crawling around in a pool of blood and crying for help. Thabiso woke up and felt terrified. This young man was living a miserable life, and it was a difficult time for him. Thabiso was scared. “This dream is so bad and scary, I don't think I'll ever sleep again,” Thabiso said, shaking. He went to the kitchen to get a drink of water. Thabiso sat down. “I miss my parents, and I hope those who killed them will face justice,” Thabiso said, drinking water. “Why did you kill my parents?” Thabiso asked and punched the wall with his fist, blood spurting from his hands. Thabiso was busy loading bricks into the truck with his friend. Thabiso was not in a good mood. “Friend, you don’t look good today. What’s wrong?” Mali asked. “Don’t worry, friend, I had a nightmare and it’s bothering me,” T...

 Her best friend Thabang had a lot of work at the police station, and it was difficult for him to visit Thabiso, he wanted to be with him. Thabang was a good detective who could solve unsolved cases. He was a good person at his job. Thabang had a beautiful daughter Mpolokeng , “Father, I have finished eating and I don’t want to be late for school,” said Mpolokeng as she picked up her school bag. “Okay, wait for me in the car, I will go get the documents from the study room,” said Thabang as he gave his daughter the car keys. Her mother was not responsible for her daughter; she was cheating, so Thabang decided to raise his daughter. Dimpho divorced Thabang because Thabang was always busy and Dimpho thought Thabang didn't have time for her. Later that day, Thabiso visited Thabang. Thabang was busy writing a report on his computer when he heard someone knocking. “I wasn’t expecting anyone. Who is it?” Thabang wondered as he approached to open the door. Thabang was very surprised becau...

 Thabiso Nthatisi was a quiet person. Thabiso grew up in difficult circumstances; his father worked in the yard, and his mother worked for white people by cleaning and tidying their houses. It was difficult for them to make ends meet because both parents earned a small salary. Crime was rampant in their area, called Platberg. This area was not safe due to the high crime rate; many people were worried about the crimes that were happening there. Thabiso was still young at the time; he was watching television with his parents and his best friend Thabang. While they were sitting, thugs attacked them, and Bra Killer kicked the door open. “Who is kicking my door?” Tefo asked. These thugs came in. His parents were terrified. “No one is doing stupid things. We want money! Where is it?” Ta Mike shouted and pulled out a gun. “We don’t have money,” Tefo said, his voice trembling. In the blink of an eye, Bra Killer approached Tefo and punched him. It was like death had struck the house.  ...

 A series about the tragic events that unfolded in Thabiso Nthatisi, who lost his parents. Thabiso was affected by the death of his parents after they were killed by criminals. Thabang, who is Thabiso's friend, fled when the criminals killed Thabiso's parents. This incident affected Thabiso's mind, and he experienced great mental stress, thinking that people did not like him without seeing that he was affected by the death of his parents. Thabiso got a job at a brick factory and met Neo and Mali. It became a problem, and the other workers did not want to work with Thabiso, thinking that he was crazy. His girlfriend, Lerato, stopped dating him after Thabiso shot Neo, thinking that he was in love with Lerato. This series is the best, and I am certain that you will enjoy it. It will express how life is. The series consists of 10 episodes and will be published over 10 days. Enjoy reading Brian Makara's stories.  The series will be published from tomorrow at 19:00 CAT Brian ...

Lerato Mokoena was a young woman raising her five-year-old daughter  who is  Mbali, in the struggling township of Molakeng , an informal settlement where poverty was a harsh reality and electricity was only beginning to be installed. Most residents cooked using paraffin stoves and lit their homes with candles. Lerato was a single mother, abandoned by her boyfriend, and barely surviving on irregular peace jobs. It was difficult to provide for herself, let alone her child. Mbali didn’t attend a creche, and Lerato often left her alone in the shack. Most days, Lerato could be found drinking at a local shebeen in Molakeng. “Government has failed us,” she said one afternoon, taking a long sip from her bottle. Her neighbor and occasional friend, Thuli, sat beside her, frowning. “I don’t like what you’re doing. You have a daughter to care for.” “Don’t stress me,” Lerato snapped. “Her father should be taking care of her. He’s the one who left.” “That doesn’t matter,” Thuli said firmly....

The river's flow, feeling its sound, A winding path, through life's wild dream, The water's voice, a soothing sound, A constant change, in a world around. The river's current, a force so strong, As my heart bond with it and see light, The ripples spread, a reflection wide, A mirror to life, where moments reside. In this river's flow, I find my peace, A sense of movement, through life's busy day, The water's flow, a wisdom true, A reminder to adapt, and see things anew. The river's journey where I met her, A gentle soul with special smile, She's a symbol of life, her voice is sweet, I see a flame of love through her.  ©Brian Makara, 2025

Naledi, a place where everyone don’t want to be, a place where investors and guest are afraid to visit it. Everyone was in shock after what the Black Tigers did, they used to torture people and rob them. This place was under siege by the gang rule. Neo who was a courier was afraid to deliver the parcels to its destination. “I saw something so bad yesterday and I don’t think I will be able to deliver,” Neo looked terrified. Neo had a terrible flashbacks about his brother who was killed by Black Tigers and even today this gang is still exist. Neo picked few boxes and load them on his van, he was driving on a road to a location and saw someone hooting him from the behind, he asked himself why the police wanted to stop him and he finally stopped. Detective Lerumo got out of his police car and stood next to Neo’s van. “Hey my man,” Lerumo greeted. “You almost gave me a heart attack, man,” Neo laughed. “Man, we need to talk and I know you have the potential,” Lerumo said. Neo was surprised. ...

  Moabi was exhausted, and it was a busy day in town. His sample catalogue was tucked under one arm, and a forced smile was  plastered to his face.   “Afternoon, sir! May I interest you in ….. ” “Not now!” the man snapped, brushing past without a second glance. Moabi  exhaled and tugged at his shirt collar. The sun dipped lower, casting long shadows. He checked his watch. He wasn’t just tired , he was invisible.  Even with a job at a furniture store that paid commission , Moabi felt empty, like a background character in someone else's  success story. Dreams of becoming someone important once burned brightly in him. Now, they flickered like dying embers.   That evening, he  slumped onto a stool in a crowded tavern, beer in hand, shoulders heavy.   “This job…” he muttered, “it’s eating me alive.”  Across from him, Phehello raised a brow.  “You’re not the only one who started from nothing, my friend.” “I envy those salary people,” Moab...

  Today’s youth are struggling because of the high rate of unemployment in South Africa. Many have graduated, but they are still roaming the streets, while others are using drugs and drinking alcohol. Kamoho, Themba and Sibusiso were young boys who finished Grade 12, but they faced many challenges in life. These young boys applied for jobs, but there was no luck. To get a job, you need to have a connection. Kamoho was playing Ludo with his friends, and there was nothing they could do. “Guys, this hunger is killing us,” Kamoho looked worried.  “When you look for a job, you need to be connected,” Themba added. “We need to come up with a plan,” Sibusiso suggested. These boys looked at each other. “You are right,” Kamoho rolled the dice. “Do you have anything?” Themba asked. “We need to rob a farm.” Sibusiso was not happy about Kamoho’s opinion.  “You are out of your mind, you will get us killed,” Sibusiso said.  “Sibusiso is right, those people have guns,” Themba added....

 The taxis and cars whizzed by on the street, their headlights casting a warm glow on the wet pavement. On the corner, a group of boys were engrossed in a heated game of soccer, their laughter and shouts carrying through the crisp winter air. The atmosphere was alive with the smell of smoke wafting from chimneys and the distant hum of traffic. I sat on the couch, my phone clutched tightly in my hand, a wide smile spreading across my face. My mother, busy peeling potatoes in the kitchen, couldn't help but notice my expression. "Sipho, what's got you so happy?" she asked, her curiosity piqued. I looked up at her, my excitement bubbling over. "It's about my father," I said, barely containing my enthusiasm. My mother's eyes lit up with interest, and she put down the potatoes, wiping her hands on her apron before sitting down beside me. "Tell me everything," she encouraged, her smile warm and inviting. I took a deep breath, launching into a stor...

 The rising sun shone like gold, and it was interesting. It’s been a week since Lerato finished matric. Lerato was Mmampho's daughter, an intelligent girl. “Mom, it’s time to focus on the future,” excited Lerato said. Her mother was a God-fearing woman, the woman who had a powerful belief. “I am excited to hear that you are focusing on the future,” Mmampho said. “So tell me which career is suitable for you?” her mother asked. “I want to be a security officer,” Lerato smiled. Mmampho doubted her choice.  “I don’t think the career is good for you,” Mmampho advised her. Lerato felt bad after Mmampho instructed her to choose another career. “Come on mom, I am worried about the crime rate in our hospitals," Lerato said. Her mother understood and allowed her to study the career of her choice. “I will talk to your father,” Mmampho said. Lerato was very excited. During the conversation with her daughter, Mmampe visited Mmampho. Mmampe was a heartless witch. “What do you want?” Mmampho...